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Tom at Four


Tom, Tom, our daughter’s son,

what and who will you become?

It is quite clear that you will be

someone quite different from me.

On the carpet here you sit,

line up your dinky cars then fit

them on a breakdown truck

and push them six by six if luck

across the rumpled rug

(and now and then a vigorous tug)

helps them reach their destination

where traffic follows your direction –

a shaky edifice with no doors

where cars can park on all three floors

with entry/exit signs which line

curving ramps at each incline.

Then when your cars are quite jammed in

you solve the problem of wherein

to drive this larger breakdown van

by pushing till your orderly plan

misfires.

When I’m no longer there

to watch you face occasions where

you’ll often need to fight for more

space than we fill here on the floor,

will you force others from their place

to win some bigger human race?

But no, I’m quite aware

that such a thought could be unfair –

my suspecting this to be the road

a warm affectionate child

might take to face the adult world,

it’s another case of overload.

Yet heaven forfend that you should bend

before some greedy selfish end

of such as lack your friendliness.

Do not, I beg you, acquiesce

when others steal your elbow room.

Take not that early road to doom –

like them you need your liberty

(though no one can be fully free).

So I hope you’ll have no truck

with those who likewise push their luck.

Seek for some more spacious place

than your breakdown drivers face

here on the floor by you and me

jostling for room and liberty.


©Terry Hodgson2020




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